endlesslyfallen
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Berries and cream, berries and cream, I'm a little lad who likes berries and cream!! :]
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Post by endlesslyfallen on Aug 2, 2007 1:35:23 GMT -5
More reviews!! :] They make me extra happy Love it? Hate it? Think it's the worst thing ever on internet fan fiction? It is all up to you to tell me :] You're just one click away from reviewing :] oh and one more thing: NO CHEESY REVIEWS!Shtank you! :] ~Sasha
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Post by Rockinmuffin on Aug 2, 2007 11:36:33 GMT -5
Very nice perspective of the traditional wall-flower; it kind of reminds me of myself when I was in middle school. I can telll that you definitely have an understanding of this and must've been used to being ignored at one point in your life or another. This brought back a lot of bad memories of the past, but at the same time that's a good thing because it helps me to better understand my feelings back then when I didn't even understand myself and it helps me to notice how much I've changed as a person since that time. So, yeah. This story hit even closer to home then your other one. "At least they still remember you. At least they still know who you are and give you praise. At least they appreciate what you do and are happy to talk to you. At least you are recognized" I love, love, LOVE that line. It makes me feel as if I'm a part of the story, as if you're saying that directly to my face and that's always, always a good literary tool to use. It's probably one of the best ways to relate to a reader or draw a reader in. So, in my opinion, it was a good piece of writing and I hope you continue to add your works to this site. And yeah, I'm cheesy. DEAL WITH IT! Lol. xD
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