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Post by lostandtorn616 on May 2, 2007 4:54:41 GMT -5
Gimmie an 'R'! Gimmie an 'E'! Gimmie a 'View'! What does that spell? REVIEW!
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May 2, 2007 16:03:57 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on May 2, 2007 16:03:57 GMT -5
Haha! xD I like this story! ^____^ And don't ask why I'm laughing. >.> I laugh at nothing sometimes. maybe that's the reason why people think I'm crazy? Well, one of the reasons anyway. Lol. xD Yay! I knew the Hyuugas were Neji and Hinata! I don't know why I sound so proud. Neji and Hinata are really the only Hyuugas I can remember other than Hiashi, his twin brother, and Hanabi or what'shername. xD Lol. Hooray for Alternate Universe Goodness! ;D I like the idea behind this story. Wait, if Gaara, Itachi and Kisame are dead... O___O OMG! NECROPHILIA! Dx Lol. Well, nice story Sharon, as always! ;3 *Huggles you and every character in the story except Neji* ... *Punches Neji in the face* xD Lol. Sorry, but I had to do that. Neji is the only character in the entire series that get's on my nerves. Probably because I don't believe in our lives being predestined for us. We're responsible for our own futures. That, and he was nasty to Hinata when she technically didn't do diddly-squat to him. *Gives Neji an extra kick to the bum for good measure* xD Lol. Sorry. ;P
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May 12, 2007 15:23:19 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on May 12, 2007 15:23:19 GMT -5
Very cool chapter. You know, it would suck to be possesed by a demon. And since you have Shukaku inside you as well does that mean you can't sleep at night? Man, that would suck. Sleeping is one of my favorite hobbies, right after... NOT-sleeping, or something. >.> Lol.
If kids really were that mean to you when you were little then I want to go visit every one of those punks right now and give them a piece of my mind. It's sick the way people can treat others. And children can be the worst; it's ironic as they're seen as innocent beings when children are really the meanest and most selfish since they haven't developed the part of their personaities that allows them to sympathize with others. >.> Hopefully you aren't so harshly mistreated now. And if you are... Just give me a list of names and adresses. >:3
I can't wait for the next chapter. ^___^ All your stories rock xD *Squeals in fangirl admiration*
PS I absolutely love Shukaku's comments. Besides the lust for murder, I think I'd be able to get along with a guy like Shukaku. I think I could challenge his perversion. >.> Lol.
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Jun 29, 2007 8:06:22 GMT -5
Post by andyouthinkimcrazy on Jun 29, 2007 8:06:22 GMT -5
XD I have a few things to say about chapter two! First of all: *beats those rotten little dick-head children into the ground with a really spiky club-thingy...*
Second: I think there were a few places you left out words.
“Kakashi-sensai, how do you it’s been a success? The ritual, I mean, what if-”
'How do you know', shouldn't it be..?
"I threw my back and swished the ice-cold lungful of water in my mouth"
'I threw my head back', right..? Just thought you might want to know...
*heads off to read the next chapter... XD*
DUN DUN DUN! NOT THE SAND! *hides Albel so he won't get himself killed XP again...*
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Jun 29, 2007 8:38:46 GMT -5
Post by andyouthinkimcrazy on Jun 29, 2007 8:38:46 GMT -5
I love Itachi-sama... I really do! *huggle glomps him* GO KATANA! KITTY! XD I love kitties! They're so cute and fluffy and cute and... I want to eat it! ~~<3 -_-; I hate remembering being a kid... makes me in a stabity mood... *grumble*
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Jul 7, 2007 20:36:06 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on Jul 7, 2007 20:36:06 GMT -5
Awwwww! I liked that chapter! Lisa-chibi is so CUTE! *Glomps Lisa and goes into annoying Japanese fangirl mode* KAWAII! ~^____^~
Man, it would suck to have a homicidal voice/entitiy stuck inside of your body, especially one as mentally deranged as Itachi. Even though it's really cute how he was protetive over Lisa when she was getting teased, though his methods are definitely not appropriate for the schoolyard. xD Lol.
And, ZOMG! A KITTEN! It sounds so cute! xD Lol. Too bad it had to be stuffed inside the darkest depths of the evil backpack of doom!
Very nice chapter! ^___^ You just know that I can't wait for the next one. ^__^
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