Reviews~~

[endlesslyfallen]

I am so stoopid. I didn't make one of this review thingies here. Wow. ahaha, yes, so here is where you can tell me how much a stuupid little EMO kid I was. haha, kidding.

But yes, please review. :] They make me extra happy :]

Oh, and one more thing, I don't like cheesy reviews. I know what a cheesy review looks like. I'm sorry if this sounds bitchy, but I'm being honest. I really appreciate it if everyone would be honest about this. 100 percent. Thank you. :]

cheesy reviews=upset/sad Sasha=not good. =\

[Rockinmuffin]

D: Well, I'm sorry if my review sounded cheesy to you. Honestly, it wasn't supposed to be. It was just that when I was reading this I kept thingking "Wow, this sounds familiar" and stuff like that and I wasn't in the mood to pick out any details because I didn't want to take too much space since it wasn't a review section and I was too tired anyway and ready to go to bed soon. D:

So sorry if I sounded cheesy, but I'm sort of a cheesy person. And I am honestt with my reviews; I rarely say anything negative because that's the type of person I am but I'm always honest and say what I feel and I thought it was a good story and that's how I say it.

And I don't think you're being bitchy either, but I just really didn't realize I was that cheesy. D:

So, again, sorry that the quality of my review wasn't to your liking. *Goes off to cry in emo corner*

[Rockinmuffin]

Now I'm going to take a second chance and try and write a better review.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I was moved; a lot of the things that you said reminded me of past relationships I had with friends that I wish that I could mend but it's much too late. I especially like when you stated how much you wanted to be friends again though you doubted your friend felt the same way; it sort of hit home.

The repetition of the word "please" was a nice effect; I've always enjoyed repetition because it really makes things stick in your head; and then the repetition of the words "I want" and how you stated different things that you wanted (duh). My favorite in particular was "I want to be a friend. Not an acquaintance, not an enemy or anything like that. A friend" And then more repetition with "I'm sorry" is always a nice effect to drill that thought into someone's head.

I like how you seem so desperate to get this friend to listen to you, especially in the beggining when you're begging for her to hear you out and listen to what you have to say. The way you wrote it, it makes the desperation feel so raw and real and myabe it's because it is real, I dunno.

And now I'm running out of things to say because when I write long reviews usually it's because I'm trying to state something humorous but there's really nothing funny about this so now my brain is DEAD.

...If this review still sounded cheesy after all that I'm seriously gonna go bang my head against a cement brick. D: