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Nov 24, 2006 4:45:11 GMT -5
Post by lostandtorn616 on Nov 24, 2006 4:45:11 GMT -5
Here's where you can be nice people and let me know what you think of this story so far. P.S. Anyone care to guess who the 'He' is? It's not very hard if you think about it.
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Nov 25, 2006 15:14:37 GMT -5
Post by andyouthinkimcrazy on Nov 25, 2006 15:14:37 GMT -5
DUN DUN DUN! ; Wow, I haven't read any sexually explicit het fics in a really REALLY long time. -_-; Yaoi Lisa said "EEEWWW! STRAIGHT LOVE >_<;" But pervy Lisa said "<.<>.> *.*" lol ^_^ In then end I came to an agreement and half pretended it was Yaoi. Ryou: I like this story! ^_^ I'm not the one being tormented! ^_~ And I really am straight, so it's a nice change. ; Wh-What..? Ryou: ; I mean... > EEEWW! GIRLS ARE SICK! *drags Ryou off to preform Yaoi acts*
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Nov 25, 2006 16:59:35 GMT -5
Post by lostandtorn616 on Nov 25, 2006 16:59:35 GMT -5
Oh ho ho ho! Lisa-chan, you make me flush with praise! Thank you so very much! *Cheeks slowly burn in embarrassment* Heh, heh, sorry if it was a bit TOO graphic for you, and if you didn't like the graphicness much, then you may wish to stray from this story come Part 2.
Ryou: Why?
It's rated R, isn't it? You have a brain, dummy head, you figure it out.
Ryou: Why do that when you're being sexually tortured by my Yami?
Ooooooooh.... point well taken and noted.... and shut up. xD
Ryou: *Grins*
Don't grin like that; or else I'll sic Lisa and her collection of sexy Yaoi men who will hug you, and glomp you, and kiss you, and molest you, and rape-
Ryou: *Covers his ears* Stop! I don't want to hear it!
*Smug smirk* Anyways, I'm glad your pervy side liked it, Lisa!
P.S. Soon I'll be posting my first CYOA story, and my GOD, it won't be me paired with whoever, but it'll be a MarikxYou or MalikxYou or BakuraxYou or a RyouxYou story; meaning you'll get to pick who you're "paired" with eventually. *Cackles insanely*
Ryou: Knowing you it'll be chopped full of violence, swearing, blood and gore and pointless attempted murders.
That's not true! Chances are there'll be mentions of somewhat meaningful murders too! *Grins*
Ryou: *Sweatdrop*
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Apr 5, 2007 23:01:37 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on Apr 5, 2007 23:01:37 GMT -5
GAH! I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story until now! *Slams head against keyboard* Dx I ish a dum-dum. Well, I enjoyed this story a lot; it's very dark and it has an interesting back-story that I would like to learn more about. Ya know, like the identities of Him and Her. >.> It's hard for fathers to accept the fact that their daughters aren't children anymore. My Dad still baby-talks to me over the phone. Or any chance he gets, really. Alas, such is the fate of the youngest child, especially a girl. The Incubus is Bakura, right? Because it would be fitting for him. Sadly, I can actually see him molesting poor unsuspecting girls in their sleep. D: Bad 'Kura, BAD! No means NO! Dx *Smacks Bakura across the face with a dead fish* BAKURA: ...The hell did you just do?! I fish-slapped you, biznatch! Dx And I'll do it again if I have to, you mutha' fookin' man-whore! BAKURA: I'll be good. >.> ...For now. I really want to see what your reaction is now that you've awakened. Personally, if I found myself in the same situation and miracuously wasn't frozen in fear, I'd reach for the nearest blunt (or sharp) object and smack him in the head. Then, while he's suffering from permanent brain damage, I'd call the cops. ^__^ Yay! Maria's a good girl! :3 Lol.
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Apr 9, 2007 19:53:18 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on Apr 9, 2007 19:53:18 GMT -5
T_T That bitch Bakura is lucky we're all asleep, cuz if I knew he was raping one of my friends I'd come in with a shot-gun and blow his brains out, no matter how much I love him.
The language in this story is so pretty and detailed. I'm really curious to see who this mystery person is, though, if he tries to rape you, he'll see my wrath too. D:< Lol. I can't wait to see more. ^__^
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May 12, 2007 3:14:28 GMT -5
Post by andyouthinkimcrazy on May 12, 2007 3:14:28 GMT -5
XO HOW DARE HE! O-o; Why would he damage the 'goods' like that? XD lol >.> Anyhow, I'll go off to make plans to kill him now. XD
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