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Sept 5, 2006 21:21:19 GMT -5
Post by a10nn0h on Sept 5, 2006 21:21:19 GMT -5
Please tell me what you think about my fan fic. As you may know, this is my first time writing a fan fic. So please, what do you think about my fan fic so far? What can I do to make it better? Be honest.
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Sept 5, 2006 21:58:51 GMT -5
Post by Rockinmuffin on Sept 5, 2006 21:58:51 GMT -5
Poor Naruto... He's such a dork. Lol. Nice job so far. Just keep on writing! The more you write the better you'll get. ^__^
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Sept 6, 2006 18:58:41 GMT -5
Post by a10nn0h on Sept 6, 2006 18:58:41 GMT -5
lol. Yeh he is. Thanks. ^^
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